Modern Australian
Men's Weekly

.

the ABC of screenwriting as demonstrated by ABC's The Heights

  • Written by Philippa Burne, Lecturer, BFA Screenwriting, Victorian College of the Arts, University of Melbourne, University of Melbourne

Why do we tell stories, and how are they crafted? In this series, we unpick the work of the writer on both page and screen.

The rule of three is a commonly held one for writers. It’s used for comedy (two relatively normal things are often followed by a third twist or stereotype), for rhythm, and it’s widely accepted that people remember things more clearly when listed in threes. Think of The Three Little Pigs, The Three Musketeers or Slip Slop Slap.

This rule of threes is also embedded deeply within television screenwriting. Writing episodic TV, scriptwriters traditionally work from a principle of having three stories woven together through an episode. These are known as the A story, the B story and the C story.

Newly launched in 2019, and already well received, the ABC’s half-hour series, The Heights, uses this threefold technique skilfully to establish characters and story world. By breaking down the pilot episode we can see how the three stories run through it.

Read more: The Heights - at last, a credible Australian working-class soap

A, B and C stories

The A story in TV drives the action, prompting the viewer to ask “What’s going to happen?” or “Who did it?”. The B storyline is typically more character-driven, or emotion-driven. The C story could be lighter, perhaps comedic, depending on the show.

The A story is the main thread of the episode, and will generally have the most plot points (or beats or scenes). The B story has fewer story beats per episode; the C story fewer still.

Plotting an episode involves working out the beats for each storyline, then weaving them together for satisfying narrative build, scene design and character development.

Wherever storylines cross over, or dramatically contrast or impact on one another, this will be carefully identified and structured to give the audience the strongest possible dramatic or comic experience.

In The Heights, The A story is that of an abandoned baby. The B story follows who will inherit the local pub. The C story explores a teenage boy’s choice about which parent to live with.

Other characters’ stories are also seeded in to be developed in later episodes - Claudia and Sabine’s arrival in town, Pav’s obtaining pain relief through marijuana, and Sully and Ash’s relationship – but these only have a single beat (within one scene).

Let’s take a look at the pilot episode, scene by scene, to uncover more about this ABC structure.

the ABC of screenwriting as demonstrated by ABC's The Heights The cast of The Heights. Ben King/ABC

Breaking down the ABC structure

The opening sequence sets up the world, and many of the characters, utilising soccer, a barbecue, and the fire alarm. The fire alarm pays off a couple of scenes later as having beena deliberate part of a plan to abandon the baby. (A story).

Hazel is set up as hoping to inherit the pub from her father, Bill, who has just died. It is her “lottery ticket”. (B story).

At the end of this sequence, Pav finds an abandoned baby in the garden. Pav rushes the baby to the hospital. Police search for clues as to the baby’s identity. (A story).

This scene also reveals that Pav is a retired, injured cop. He has to climb the stairs and has leg pain, so he self-medicates with marijuana. His kids and ex-wife are established for the audience. Mich, his son, wants to stay with Pav rather than Leona, his mother. (C story).

This scene also cleverly keeps the A-story alive by featuring a news report of the abandoned baby – this technique is used across many scenes of the episode. So, it’s not necessarily new information for the A-story – though it might be – but is functioning to tie the characters and community together for the audience, and also give the characters information.

Claudia and Anna meet while nursing the abandoned baby. This scene also functions to further develop the world and interlink the characters through a common workplace. (A story). Claudia is home to her unpacked boxes and her daughter, Sabine, who is starting at the local high school the next day.

Hazel is opening the pub and a mystery man watches her. He is revealed to be her estranged son, Ryan, and the tension between them is established due to Ryan having stolen money from the pub and been gone 12 years. (B story). Also, his sister Shannon is established as having been gone for some weeks. Shannon will be revealed to be important to the A-story.

The grocery store is established, with its proprietor, Iris, her son Sully and his friend, Ash. Pav and Leona meet there and talk in the street about their kids. (C story).

the ABC of screenwriting as demonstrated by ABC's The Heights From left, Phoenix Raei (Ash) and Koa Nuen (Sully) in The Heights. Bohdan Warchomij/AAP

At the river, Ryan and Anna meet up. A possible rekindled romance is seeded, and the pub inheritance discussed. (B story). Shannon’s absence is mentioned.

At the beach, Pav hangs out with his kids. They discuss trying to find the mother of the baby, and also Mich’s living arrangements. (A,C stories).

Hazel plans to sell the pub and retire, and Ryan pays back the money. (B, A stories).

Clues to the baby’s mother are discussed by Pav and Max. A girl is watching Claudia nurse the baby. Claudia gives chase. (A story).

Bill’s wake is being held, and Hazel and Ryan begin to reconcile, before a lawyer arrives and tells Hazel that Bill left the pub in equal shares to Hazel, Ryan and Shannon. Hazel is furious. Then Shannon arrives and collapses. There is a big reveal - Shannon is the baby’s mother. (B,A stories).

Establishing themes

As this breakdown shows, the greatest number of story beats revolve around the episode’s A story: the abandoned baby. The mystery is solved by the end, the story having served its dramatic function in driving it while simultaneously connecting the characters and establishing the show’s world and recurring themes, namely parenting and family.

The B story has the next highest number of story beats. It has left major characters – Hazel and Ryan – with a dramatic legacy to be played out in future episodes (owning and running the pub). These estranged family members are now tied together in day-to-day responsibility.

The C story has the fewest number of beats, and begins another ongoing story about family and responsibility. It is less dramatic and immediate than the A and B stories, but has plenty of potential for emotional, long-term narrative – and future drama.

Authors: Philippa Burne, Lecturer, BFA Screenwriting, Victorian College of the Arts, University of Melbourne, University of Melbourne

Read more http://theconversation.com/inside-the-story-the-abc-of-screenwriting-as-demonstrated-by-abcs-the-heights-115854

Unlock Durability And Beauty With Burnt Timber Cladding Solutions

Imagine a home or commercial space that not only stands the test of time but also tells a story through its very facade. In the world of architectur...

Offroad Caravans: Built for Adventure Beyond the Beaten Track

Australia’s vast and varied landscapes invite travellers to explore far beyond sealed roads and crowded parks. Offroad caravans are purpose-built ...

The Expert's Guide to Understanding Large Bore Steel Pipe Specifications

When it comes to infrastructure, construction, and various industrial applications, the choice of materials is paramount. Among the options availabl...

Preparing for Your First Trip to San Francisco in 2026

San Francisco has long occupied a particular place in the Australian imagination. It is compact yet complex, progressive but historic, and visually st...

Modern Office Painting in Australia - It's the Real Game Changer

Walk into any modern Australian office today and you'll be struck by the fact it's a whole different beast from the ones we grew up with. Gone are t...

How to Choose the Right Suburb for Your Lifestyle

Choosing the right suburb is one of the most important decisions you’ll make when buying or renting a home. Beyond the property itself, the suburb...

Considering Cryolipolysis Fat Freezing? Here’s What You Need to Know

Body confidence can shift over time, and sometimes even good diet and training can still leave a stubborn area of fat that won’t budge. If you’r...

From Local Tradie to Digital Leader: The Strategy Behind Auto Gate Guys Sydney’s Growth

For many small trade businesses, digital marketing still feels like a buzzword, not a necessity. They rely on word-of-mouth referrals, repeat clients...

Electric Automation System: Smarter Control for Modern Electrical Infrastructure

Modern buildings and industrial facilities are increasingly dependent on intelligent control and efficiency. An electric automation system brings t...

The Damp Truth: Why Your Overflowing Gutters Are an Open Invitation for Termites

When it comes to protecting your home, most people think about visible threats — storm damage, cracked tiles, break-ins. But one of the most destruc...

Is Your Inventory a Sitting Duck? 2 Critical Upgrades to Protect Your Business Assets and Your Bottom Line

Imagine this: you finish a long day on the job, lock up your tools, materials, and work vehicle in the garage, and head home. But overnight, someone b...

Electrician in Melbourne: Reliable Electrical Solutions for Homes and Businesses

Finding a dependable electrician Melbourne is essential when safety, efficiency, and long-term performance matter. Electrical systems form the back...

Rims and Tyres for Sale in Sydney: Performance, Safety, and Style Combined

Finding the right rims and tyres for sale Sydney is about far more than appearance. Tyres and rims directly influence how a vehicle handles, brakes...

Why Access to Doctors in Bundoora Is Essential for Ongoing Community Health

Reliable access to healthcare plays a vital role in maintaining physical wellbeing and peace of mind. Having trusted doctors in Bundoora available ...

Pendant Lights: Elevating Interior Spaces With Style and Purpose

Well-chosen pendant lights have the power to transform interiors by combining focused illumination with strong visual impact. More than just a ligh...

What Sets Professional Family Lawyers in Sydney Apart from General Lawyers?

Choosing the right legal support can make a noticeable difference when dealing with family-related matters. This article will explore what separates...

Balancing Teen Academic Expectations and Wellbeing

For many teenagers, school years are shaped by increasing expectations. Academic performance, future pathways, and comparison with peers can create pr...

Why Ceiling Fans Remain One of the Most Effective Solutions for Year-Round Comfort

Creating a comfortable indoor environment without relying heavily on energy-intensive systems is a priority for many households. Installing ceiling ...